Reworked final scene with adjusted lighting, buildings and structures and the added inclusion of wooden poles creating a form of path or gateway to buildings or the city itself.
well done, Ted - but I think you need to look at the framing here as the centre building is very pushed up against the edge of the frame - I think you need to open it up a bit to make it more comfy on the eye and feel a little more balanced :)
I think this is one of the toughest projects I have ever undertaken in my time in education. I have felt both scared and stressed out believing I will fail this whole course if I even remotely submitted anything subpar and thus fail at having a career in animation. Not helping was the Covid pandemic which has greatly affected the university, my mental health, my course, my family, among much more. While I think I am likely to pass the course now that I have submitted all the necessary components for my major project, needless to say there is quite a bit I wish I could have done better. The reason I believe for a lot of this was simply time. Some was out of my control other times I feel I could have done something to help myself give a better outcome of the project. I cannot help but feel that while it could've gone a lot worse my project could've been a lot better if I had a bit more time such as having better time management and stopping myself from procrastinating as often....
well done, Ted - but I think you need to look at the framing here as the centre building is very pushed up against the edge of the frame - I think you need to open it up a bit to make it more comfy on the eye and feel a little more balanced :)
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