Reworked final scene with adjusted lighting, buildings and structures and the added inclusion of wooden poles creating a form of path or gateway to buildings or the city itself.
well done, Ted - but I think you need to look at the framing here as the centre building is very pushed up against the edge of the frame - I think you need to open it up a bit to make it more comfy on the eye and feel a little more balanced :)
Influence map of my chosen topic - Darwinian Evolution or Darwinism, showing images of evolving animals, different environments, cells and their complex structures and DNA.
well done, Ted - but I think you need to look at the framing here as the centre building is very pushed up against the edge of the frame - I think you need to open it up a bit to make it more comfy on the eye and feel a little more balanced :)
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