Hey Ted - these are all much more interesting now. I like the bottom one, but it raises the design issue of 'all that ground' at the front of the image. I think therefore you need to think about how you might demarcate pathways, landscaping and so on - so elements you've haven't thought about or designed yet, but which associate logically with your artist and your concept for these buildings. I notice you've got a building peeping over the top of that big building on the right of the bottom image - compositionally, I suggest you delete that asset because it's not contributing and your scene would be better off without it.
Influence map of my chosen topic - Darwinian Evolution or Darwinism, showing images of evolving animals, different environments, cells and their complex structures and DNA.
Hey Ted - these are all much more interesting now. I like the bottom one, but it raises the design issue of 'all that ground' at the front of the image. I think therefore you need to think about how you might demarcate pathways, landscaping and so on - so elements you've haven't thought about or designed yet, but which associate logically with your artist and your concept for these buildings. I notice you've got a building peeping over the top of that big building on the right of the bottom image - compositionally, I suggest you delete that asset because it's not contributing and your scene would be better off without it.
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