In this exercise I experimented with various poses for the already rigged model. I tried out various poses from mostly sports while still trying to remain varied to even a knight duel for further experimentation. I had pose not just the limbs but also fingers to add details to the character, adjust the neck, tilt their head to detail the posture and act. Make it seem more lifely. I also chose the poses because I felt there was some ambiguity to the expression and action of the character. Is he running and excising or running in fear?
Hi Ted,
ReplyDeleteAnother thorough review :)
I think in places, your enthusiasm for the subject and the writing get the better of you a little, as sometimes it seems to ramble a bit, and not always 100% make sense - here for example...
"This is very much evidenced by the walls seen in Mopu Palace, the main setting of the film, are decorated with murals of naked individuals dancing, another character, Sister Philippa plants flowers instead of the required produce; symbolic of female sexual organ, and Mr. Dean who wears more revealing clothing than the nuns."
- I'm not sure what exactly is symbolic of the female sexual organs here?
It's also good practice to refer to your images withing the text - so for example, when you say
"In contrast, there is more of a struggle of the sensual ambitions of the nuns; near the end the lighting becomes warmer more saturated implying strong emotions and deep passion, as shown in figure 4."
So my main advice to you would be to read your writing back out loud to yourself before you post it, just to make sure that it makes complete sense. :)