Hey Ted - one of the bits of feedback from your pitch concerned the client's confusion as to why you were talking about microbes/mitosis - because there was a risk of you mixing up different subjects in the audience's minds. You've got that idea in your film about the 'low-poly' organism that overtime becomes 'high-poly' - I think this is a good concept, but one that likely doesn't need too much more complication. I also felt that first part of your animatic was confusing... do you need it?
Influence map of my chosen topic - Darwinian Evolution or Darwinism, showing images of evolving animals, different environments, cells and their complex structures and DNA.
Hey Ted - one of the bits of feedback from your pitch concerned the client's confusion as to why you were talking about microbes/mitosis - because there was a risk of you mixing up different subjects in the audience's minds. You've got that idea in your film about the 'low-poly' organism that overtime becomes 'high-poly' - I think this is a good concept, but one that likely doesn't need too much more complication. I also felt that first part of your animatic was confusing... do you need it?
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