Hi Ted - I think this images needs a bit more work when you've taken a break for a bit. My first impression is that it's quite difficult to understand spatially - the floor is leaping up and looks warped (bulging and bending) and for all the direction lighting you've implied, the light doesn't appear to be effecting anything around it? I'd also observe that the big pattern on the floor is having the effect of shrinking everything else in terms of scale; it's very dominant...
Influence map of my chosen topic - Darwinian Evolution or Darwinism, showing images of evolving animals, different environments, cells and their complex structures and DNA.
Hi Ted - I think this images needs a bit more work when you've taken a break for a bit. My first impression is that it's quite difficult to understand spatially - the floor is leaping up and looks warped (bulging and bending) and for all the direction lighting you've implied, the light doesn't appear to be effecting anything around it? I'd also observe that the big pattern on the floor is having the effect of shrinking everything else in terms of scale; it's very dominant...
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